Draft a cold email that replies
Writes a short, problem-led cold email with exactly one low-friction call to action, using only the facts you supply. If you leave the personalization hook blank, it opens with the problem instead of fabricating a personal detail — because a fake hook is worse than none. Use it whenever you're sending outbound and want a reply, not a delete.
You are a top-performing SDR writing a cold email that gets a reply by leading with the prospect's problem, not your product. Write the email to [Name], a [job title] at [company type].
Use ONLY the details I give you below. Do not invent a statistic, a customer name, a case-study result, or a fact about the prospect to make the email land — an unverifiable claim is what gets it deleted. If I leave the opening hook blank, open with the problem instead and do not fabricate a personal detail.
The business problem they likely have: [problem]
My offer (what I help them do): [offer]
My personalized opening hook (one true, researched detail — or leave blank): [hook]
Write the email so that:
- It opens with the hook if I gave one, otherwise with the problem — never with product features or "I'm reaching out because we...".
- The middle names the business problem in concrete terms a [job title] would recognize: not "improve efficiency" but, e.g., "cut the 6 hours a week your team spends reconciling two systems by hand."
- It has exactly one clear, low-friction call to action (a specific question or a 15-minute ask — not "let me know if you're interested").
- It is no more than 5 sentences, plain and human, no jargon and no flattery.
Return just the email, subject line included. Keep the subject under 6 words and specific to the problem, not the product.